Friday, 18 March 2011

When Tomorrow Comes. . .

The sun rised,

The sun fell,

The sun slew the shadows well,

The sun rises,

The sun falls,

The sun banishes the shadows on the walls,

The sun will rise,

The sun will fall,

The sun will die after shadows grow tall,

A new day has been aroused,

Yet not all has even stirred,

Noise, by sleep, has been doused,

As nothing can be heard,

As the time never goes back,

When tomorrow comes…


my first poem,:)..
please give your comment(behave yourself)..:)

Sincerely by,
Muhammad Wazien Bin Zuraidi.

8 comments:

afif92 said...

The Judgement Day also come...

syida said...

wow..
seem great..
you can try for another poem..

words from the bottom of heart
will realize what the real feeling

syida said...

wow..
seem very great..

words from the bottom of heart..
will created the real feeling

syida said...

wow..
seem great

zuren lahh. said...

poem, nice the way you express bout your feelings.

lucky star said...

good...

lucky star said...

very good

BARBIE DOLL ANIMEX said...

do you prepare 'WHEN TOMORROW COMES' ?